Wednesday, July 4, 2018

The Fourth Of July 2018 (2) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today is the Independence day of the USA
but I do not want to create a poem about that, oh nay!

it is the first birthday of my first grandchild
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Nabakishore Dash 02 November 2021

Excellent write Ma'am.your first grand child would have been happy to read it by now.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 February 2019

Thank you dear Poets and dear Poetesses for your valuable feedback, precious compliments and worthy comments on the poem Tribute for my first Grandchild, a beautiful babyson, which was chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as the Member Poem Of The Day on the SAME DAY as I have submitted the poem. This happens very seldom as Dr. Pintu Mahakul also remarked when he responded this MPOTD. Thank you very much dear poets.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2018

wonderful poetic expression //

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 December 2018

Thank you so much Mahtab, your response on the poem means a very lot to me. G.B.U. Amen

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Luz Hanaii 02 September 2018

How sweet, your first grandchild. Happy belated birthday for your precious boy. He will be so happy to read this in a not so distant future. Best to you always and your family.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 December 2018

Thank you so much dear Luz, I appreciate your response most precious. Your visit to my poem site most appreciated. Best to you too and to yours. G.B.U. Amen.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 04 July 2018

Good wishes with the child. Independent America will serve the child at its best, expected. Thanks for sharing. Pranab k c

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I must disappoint you Pranab, my grandchild is born in the Netherlands and that lies in West-Europe. I haven't known at all that when a child is born in the USA, that Independent America will serve this child at its best. I don't know about this at all. Thank you for the info.. A 10 for the Vote.

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Pranab k c 04 July 2018

Good wishes with the child. Independent America will serve the child at its best, expected. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you so much for your comment and feedback. This must be Pranab again, right? Our nephew resides in the USA, but was born on the 2nd of July in 2012. And my first grandchild is born on the 4th of July previous year, but he resides in the Netherlands, an excellent country. A 10

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 04 July 2018

Precious moment of being grandmother is unforgettable. You have created a nice poetic gem in memory of first birthday of your first grandchild. This is really an emotional masterpiece. Much blessings and care we feel in this poem. Anything gifted in love is great. While he will grow one day he will read this poem and he will be astonished. A baby boy born with soft heart is very cute. I congratulate you. This is a nice poem of the day in PH today ..Giving 10.

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I thank you from my deepest being for your lovely and inspiring responses. Immense thanks for the excellent feedback, Mrs. Bhargabi. I feel flattered, humbled and honoured by your greatest support that is covered with the Lord's Love, Thank you so much for your loveliest words, showered upon me on this day. God's Blessings in Greatest Abundance be upon thee. Thank you for the 10 given.

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Captain Cur 04 July 2018

Happy birthday to your first grandchild! This poem is penned with love, imagination and moved my heart! Beautiful!

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WOW! Captain Cur, to meet you again here on my poem site, I am in utmost glee, since I still remember you on Poetfreak anno 2011. Really kindest of you to leave some loveliest comment and inspiring words, they touched my heart too and how! Your most welcome, Capt.Cur. Thank you so much for your ardent comment.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 July 2018

A wonderful birthday poem from a great grandmother. Very heartwarming and lovingly penned for a very well loved baby boy. Beautifully crafted.10+++++

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Thank you immensely, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, you are oft supporting me with the highest, kindest and most caring way, these feedback and frank comments must come truly from an honorable lady of poetry. Thank you so much, Mrs. Juan-Austin. God's Blessings Be Abundest! Thank you for the 10+++++

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Lyn Paul 04 July 2018

What a Birthday Gift for your Grand Son. A poem with love. May you see them all soon.

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Thank you very much for your lovely comment. My spouse and I have been visiting them in recently Ghana on the African continent. But on his Birhday we were back in the NL again. In the end of July, my daughter-in-law has finished her medical specialism and afterwards they would return to the NL.If she remains in the NL awaiting to finish her specialism, that's too long.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 July 2018

We hope you have celebrated his birthday very well. His innocent face and cuteness motivate mind of readers in this poem as you have represented him as usual in daily life. This poem is a live or we can say a living poem from your core of memory.. Your effort is adorable. Wonderful reflection of your first grandson you have presented here. This poem is definitely treasured with time. This is the best poem you have created this year. Rating 10 for this.

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Yes, they have indeed, since we were already back at the time he celebrated his Birthday with his parents.and all their best friends in Ghana. Thank you for the grand compliments as your concluding line says and also for the 10 rating.God; s Greatest Blessings be upon you.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 July 2018

Your precious moment of perception is well reflected in this grandson poem. Memorable 4th July 2018 is his first birthday. We are really very happy to convey him our best wishes. Let moon prince grow into full moon, pleasant personality, a great achiever and God's messenger. We offer our prayer before Heavenly Father for his fortune and happiness. By God's grace we expect his bright future. A grandmother's emotion we feel on this occasion.

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I love the Moon as the theme in most of my poems, but here I like very much that you say that in this way, your way, so beautiful: Let moon prince grow into full moon etc etc. Thank you for the blessings you sprinkles upon my grandson and thank you so much for the best wishes you conveyed. GBU, Dr. Pintu Mahakul.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 July 2018

Wow! This is really great to see your poem here. This poem is written today and selected soon after your composition as Poem of the Day. This is your great achievement. This poem is worthy and this reflects your affectionate eagerness of being a grandmother towards your grandson. As he is in Ghana with your son an daughter-in-law, you have traveled there to sprinkle your blessings. You have done your nice duty to see this shining moon of your family.

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Thank you so much Dr. Pintu Mahakul for the metaphorical response you have left here on my poem site. Indeed, he IS a shining moon of our family, the FIRST grandchild. Thank you so much for all your Blessings and Feedback.

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Dr. Antony Theodore 04 July 2018

we wish you blessed and happy childhood days enjoy the love of your mom and dad to the fullest. care, concern, love. wishes.. a heart full of charming love. thank u dear poetess. congrats! for POD. tony

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Thank you so much, Dr. Antony Theodore, for the well wishes for my first grandchild. Thank you for the wishes you conveyed to me based upon the POD. God's Blessings be In Abundance.

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Chinedu Dike 04 July 2018

An affectionate rendition written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful poem written to commemorate one year birthday by a doting grandmother. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Sylvia and do remain enriched.

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Thank you so much for your sympathetic comments and well wishes on my first grandson's BirthDay, Chinedu. Sorry that I have returned just now to thank you for your well wishes on his birthday.GBU.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2018

CONGRATULATIONS! This is nice to see your recent poem as member poem of the day. This is a very nicely penned memorable affectionate poem. The Independence day of the USA has come in memory at first. We are are glad to hear about first birthday of your first grandchild who is in Ghana with his parents. Your grandson is cute baby, smart and gentle. May God bring fortune and joy for him! We are sending rich blessings for him. This is an excellent poem...10

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ONE: Thank you so much for your generous comment, Mr. Kumarmani. Indeed, I am very happy that Poem Hunter's Team has chosen this Birthday Poem as The Member Poem Of The Day and that on the same day, thus on last 4th of July. It feels like a greatest blessing for me personally.

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TWO: Thank you a very lot for the Congratulations, yes, I am very happy for PH Team's choice, I am also very happy with your generous comments and rich Blessings for my grandson. Thank you so much for your constant support. May your life be always Blessed Abundatly and that of your beloved family. Thank you for the 10 too.

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