Sunday, January 17, 2016

The Fourth Generation Comments

Rating: 5.0

It seems a Quixote Quest
This Fourth Generation Flight,
Antennai twitching, wings barely
Moving the heavy air;
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Marianne Reninger
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Savita Tyagi 24 January 2016

Some time back I read an article on Morarch butterflies winter migration to Maxico. I was so fascinated with it. Enjoyed reading a poem about it.

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Pamela Sinicrope 20 January 2016

WOW! You attached your art. LOVE IT! I enjoyed visiting your web page and seeing what you've done. I started imagining what you would do with POETRY AGAINST TERROR. That would make a really cool collage. This is an interesting art form I am not all that familiar with, though it fascinates me.

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Pamela Sinicrope 17 January 2016

I will visit your painting. This whole butterfly migration is fascinating. I've only seen photographs, but also read about it in Barbara Kingsolver's book. I love your opening line, use of simile (orange battalion) , and alliteration. You conveyed much with a modest number of carefully chosen words. Thanks.

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Marianne Reninger 17 January 2016

Have to give it to Kingsolver for the orange battalion line; yes, her book was exciting especially for someone living in the Appalachians. Thanks again Pamela

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Pamela Sinicrope 17 January 2016

I had trouble getting to your painting. Can you post a pic here on PH with your poem?

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