The Four Grandmothers Comments

North, south, east and west! With the ways of life. Nice work.

Creative poem, I liked it.............10

That life conceived In darkness born The light that lights my eye is wisdom's child. Beautifully conceptualized theme of the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

Beautifull piece sir

wonderful cognitive metaphor: ''The Light that lights my eye is Wisdom's Child '' nice symbolistic poem 10+++++++