Tuesday, June 28, 2016

The Fountain Comments

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The fountain starts again.
Rippling its refrain
Above improbable shadows,
As goldfish fins flutter
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Tom Billsborough
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Valsa George 30 July 2018

Beautiful image of inspiration springing as a fountain and flights of fancy as the flutter of the fins of goldfish in a pool! Lovely write!

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Hazel Connelly 28 June 2016

I like this poem Tom it just describes my fish pond to a t

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Tom Billsborough 28 June 2016

Thank you, Hazel.

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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