Wednesday, September 10, 2014

The Fortune Maker Comments

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I do not reveal the lines hidden
In mounds of dirt,
Upon my multilingual palms,
And neither do I now down to the hymn,
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Hardik Vaidya
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Roseann Shawiak 24 January 2016

Profound and thought provoking poem, I like the expression of multilingual palms, it rings a bell of truth throughout my inner mind somehow. In memories I do see the youth of my existence and wish I could once again hold it. Really like this one, Hardik, it fills my mind with youthful ideas. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Hardik Vaidya

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Mahuva, Gujarat, India.
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