Tuesday, February 7, 2017

The Forlorn Chimes Comments

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With footsteps quiet and slow
I walked along a breezy grassy way;
Silence fell upon the bushland
Except for the hustle and bustle of the leaves.
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Saima Sharif
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Oluseyi Amoo 07 February 2017

Though it is long, I like the story telling and word choice

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Saima Sharif 09 February 2017

Thank you for taking time to read such a long poem and comment on it. Truly inspiring, Oluseyi.

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Saadat Tahir 07 February 2017

a bit longish but nice and fresh nostalgia of days gone by....i liked to walk along and enjoy the changing time and mood liked

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Saima Sharif 09 February 2017

Thank you for reading this longish poem and for your inspiring comment on it.

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