Thursday, December 12, 2013

The Forgotten Souls (Left To Die On The Streets Alone) Comments

Rating: 4.8

In a dream like world
in a dream like state
all that they have
is their skin and their bones
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Dave Alan Walker
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Stephen W 11 January 2014

Very well written indeed.

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Ameya Deshpande 06 January 2014

very nice......love it very much

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Marvin Brato 27 December 2013

Life is unfair....allows the fittest to survive and the least forgotten!

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 December 2013

Beautiful and touching poem indeed. It's very true such people are there everywhere. Fantastic write. Thank you.

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J.s. Shankar 23 December 2013

This seems to acclaim the delusions of life where everybody oscillates between earth planet and nether world. And God also doesn't come to raise our souls. Well write Dave. Nice one...

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Smoky Hoss 19 December 2013

You speak powerfully to us all, and for those, so many who do seem forgotten; let us hope, and do our part to help them feel not forgotten. Great words Dave.

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Rubab Atwal 18 December 2013

a very touching and thoughtful poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 December 2013

Poignant lines presenting reality. Such people are found in all parts of the world. Great write. Thank you.

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Paul Brookes 17 December 2013

A great poem I wrote on called 'His Shoes' with a similar theme. Hope that there is some shelter this Christmas for the forgotten souls. I shall try and do my bit. Thanks for sharing BB: O)

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David Wood 16 December 2013

The churches in Swansea open their doors overnight for the homeless to sleep in until March, we do this every year. Lovely reminder to us all who have homes.

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Hazel Durham 15 December 2013

Superb write expressed with sincerity and care for the forgottens souls of the streets!

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Valerie Dohren 14 December 2013

A state of affairs that should not exist in the 21st century. Good write Dave.

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