Saturday, June 9, 2018

The Forgotten Land [the Desert] Comments

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The Sun shone with eager hast
upon the desert.
As cloud's bellowed
across the Sun burnt land.
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Carl Roussell 15 June 2018

Your poem makes me want to be in a desert after a rain to experience the bloom. Good write. A 10.

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