Wednesday, May 17, 2023

The Forgotten Artist Comments

Rating: 5.0

He sits alone 'most every night
watching in the firelight,
his useless hands lie on his knee
lifeless, white deformity.
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Patricia Denise Newman
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Michael Cochrane 17 May 2023

Very heartfelt poem, showing a deep understanding of how you remember your father's difficulties in losing his gifts. Remember your dad is two steps ahead of you and one day in the next world you will be reunited. God bless you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 May 2023

Great poetry! I appreciate the prudent comment of poet David. Top score.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 May 2023

Beautiful tribute to a dearly loved father Bravo!

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David Wood 17 May 2023

Sad but beautiful portrait of an artist ravaged by medical conditions. It is almost my autobiography too, as I used to paint and play clarinet too, but arthritis got the upper hand. I hope it make Poem of the Day, it deserves to.

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