The Forever Of You Comments
The forever of you
Is in between all I do...
In a passing field of flowers
In the morning sky,
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DOROTHY, MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND LET YOU REST IN PEACE! ! ! I WISHED I'D BEEN AWARE OF HER PASSING A YEAR AGO! ! ! GOD BLESS DOROTHY! ! ! THE ANGELS AND JESUS CHRIST NOW SURROUND YOU WHILE YOUR BODY REST'S IN PEACE AND SLEEPS FOR NOW! ! GOD BLESS YOU IN YOUR SLEEP FILLED REST! SINCERELY MICHAEL JEFFREY GALE! ! !
Beautiful poem sir.....Really I like this poem.....10++++++
...the empty spaces when we are apart. Short and meaningful, I liked this a lot.
lovely poem, bound together in love, its unbearable to be apart.. thanks for sharing..
Perfect words of love you ring out parting is such sweet sorrow with a loving lilt...thankyou and regards
I like the simplicity of your flow and the mastery of your thought. I rate it 10/10...
So happy to find you on the first page dear singing Dorothy! More of your poems deserve to be here, love the gentle way you warm the hearts with the most beautiful lullabies! Thank you for sharing, always a pleasure to read your poems!
I am so excited to have had my poem chosen for the first page. Thank you for your lovely comment! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Especially enjoy the economy of words, and the minimalistic approach.
congratulations for the poem of the day. Saying that you are ever in thoughts it sounds very pleasing. Wonderful poem shared.10.
Young Lady, I do believe this site has chosen a most polished and eloquent poem to begin this early Sunday morning in April...I'm back here on PH...PF really became a FREAK SHOW...of the 3rd Kind! ! ! I can't operate under such an infantile & counter productive environment...Besides, all, or the mass majority of our Inner Circle is long gone, probably for the same reason as I boogied....Hope all is well in your world missy! Keep in touch, and while you're at it...consider a move over here...Your skills & contributions are sorely needed & will be surely welcome...Frank
This is a lovely poem, you make us understand your feelings in so few words. Thank you for your comments on my poem. -TW-
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7/20/2025 3:12:16 AM # 1.0.0
DOROTHY THIS POEM ENDEARS TO MY HEART, HOPEFULLY THE REST MY BODY WILL FEEL, WHEN I ENTER INTO MY PEACE FILLED SLEEP, THEN FINALLY INTO A PAIN FREE NEW BODY, WITH JESUS CHRIST AND GOD, GOD BLESS US ALL, US CHILDREN OF GOD! ! ! GREAT POEM INDEED BY A GREAT POETESS! ! !