Tuesday, March 11, 2008

The Forever Goal Comments

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We break and take what we make
Of this strive that we thrive to burst to life
To do what we set long ago
And show whom we know
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Coreena Dejesus 24 March 2008

Nick emotions well written, I agree with Jerrica this one came from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Hugs Coreena

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~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 12 March 2008

thats a great one i like it a lot

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Jerrica Juarez 11 March 2008

this is a poem that i think that came from the heart..... it was a good one to me..i really like it =)

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