Tuesday, December 13, 2016

The Force Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Since Love has gone, —
I am gone with it;
For Life to reborn:
I must die with it.
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2018

Wisdom comes with age: Enlightenment of your soul.— It seems almost strange... Now, —I desire Life much more! ......so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharinmg.

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Hazel Durham 21 June 2018

Superb write Mihaela with inspired lines and i love the title, a very insightful write!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 April 2018

A beautiful poem! I liked the first stanza most! ...Since Love has gone, —/I am gone with it/For Life, to reborn: I must die with it.......very pragmatic expression! Wisdom comes with age- -Loved reading it!

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Kim Barney 13 December 2016

If wisdom comes with age, as you say, then I must be really, really wise! I enjoyed the poem. Well done.

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