Monday, October 20, 2008

The Forbidden Well Comments

Rating: 4.5

Every day I watched,
As they disappeared
Through the well tapered
Herbaceous hedge.
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Eibhlin Theresa
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Wistful yearning to touch the forbidden.Very good for a beginner-I saw your forum post.You have great potential wonderful poetry.Keep up with it and good luck writing.

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Jester's P 23 October 2008

while reading 'The Forbidden Well' i remember my dear late brother who used to read me stories- the best of his brotherly love that was...your poem touched me so much that i realize i mis him so much...could it be a dream? or a nightmare? to loss a brother, a friend...keep it up

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