Friday, June 26, 2020

The Forbidden Planet Poem Comments

Rating: 4.7

When it comes to writing new poems,
Its easy to write colour by numbers.
The same old repeated unoriginality,
As a complacent imagination slumbers.
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Shaun Cronick 01 July 2020

Thank you Bernard for your kind comment.

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Shaun Cronick 01 July 2020

Thank you Dominic for your superb comments.

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Shaun Cronick 01 July 2020

Thank you Douglas for your kind comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 June 2020

A well crafted composition. Simply astonishing....10++

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Dominic Windram 27 June 2020

Great poem Shaun...I thoroughly enjoyed read it. You're spot on. There are so many interesting subjects and topics out there from which we can draw inspiration...especially films. It's a Dr.Morbius/ Prospero induced 10 from me!

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Douglas Scotney 26 June 2020

Yes. And what about 'Eyes Wide Shut'?

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Shaun Cronick 26 June 2020

This since being upped has been slightly revised and I might put up a written longer version.

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