Thursday, February 14, 2008

The Forbidden Fruit Comments

Rating: 5.0

Borrowed moments borrowed time
sifted through a mill of agony

LIfelessly and through the gates
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Bonnie Collins
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Andrew Blakemore 02 February 2009

Just beautiful Bonnie, strains of Adam and Eve woven into another masterpiece. I love your poetry. Love, Andrew

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Abha Sharma 20 April 2008

Many a times we tend to do to what our inner conscience disagrees…but the destiny makes us go, we become the puppets…so our NO…becomes YES…a nice interesting composition…

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Dana Vespa 21 February 2008

Amazing poem...well written

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Bonnie Collins

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Middletown New York
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