Thursday, November 10, 2005

The Fool Comments

Rating: 4.5

He seems to me a fool in full splendour;
You yearn for him,
and yet, he does not give you a second thought.
Surely he is blind,
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Steve Armstrong
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Ivy Christou 18 December 2005

fine work Stephen.. Especially in our age this feeling is quite common and the title applies to more than one person.. Keep posting HBH

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Ernestine Northover 21 November 2005

That is a horrible feeling, being rejected in favour of another. The ills of life. Love Ernestine

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Mary Nagy 16 November 2005

I'm impressed! Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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***** ********* 10 November 2005

Stephen you seem to know your greek mythology. The thing about love is, you can't push it, or rush it, or force it, love just is. Very nice work. 9 from me. Smiling Tai

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