Wednesday, May 17, 2006

The Fool I'Ve Come To Be Comments

Rating: 2.5

Hey, do you see the fool I’ve come to be
To protect you from those twisted lies
I schemed... I tried, I failed, I fried
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Lynnie Kim
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Brian Dorn 18 May 2006

Lynnie, one risk of blind loyalty is the cost of losing one's self and feeling the fool because of it. Live and learn... awesome poem with an intriguing end! Brian

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Preeti - is here! 17 May 2006

liked this one.esp the end! Preets

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Deanna More 17 May 2006

.. Lynnie, great poem! I really enjoyed reading it. 'Till the day my faith is renewed I'm afraid you don't know me as you think you do' - (very clever!) Deanna xx

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