Hey, do you see the fool I’ve come to be
To protect you from those twisted lies
I schemed... I tried, I failed, I fried
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.. Lynnie, great poem! I really enjoyed reading it. 'Till the day my faith is renewed I'm afraid you don't know me as you think you do' - (very clever!) Deanna xx
Lynnie, one risk of blind loyalty is the cost of losing one's self and feeling the fool because of it. Live and learn... awesome poem with an intriguing end! Brian