Monday, August 18, 2014

The Foodies Have A Spat Comments

Rating: 3.5

He gulped.
She stood there with a knife,
and the blade was poised
above the steaming bread.
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Oliver Ovid
COMMENTS
Jazib Kamalvi 19 August 2019

such a nice piece of work, Frank N.Footer. You may like to read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Bri Edwards 27 June 2017

i cut the cheese the other day and my mate had to open all the windows to air out the house! this now goes into my/our monthly 'showcase for and by PH poets', July 2017's edition. i'll actually just include your name and the link to this poem page. thanks. bri :)

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Michael Oliver 14 October 2014

Best to bake alone - then more hot bread more butter more cheese and the innocence of virginity.

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Sara Fielder 31 August 2014

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. This is real life without the pink paint many poets cover it up with. My daughter said to tell you No, he is NOT an extremely bad poet and I have to agree with her!

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 18 August 2014

A beautiful poem on love and interested.

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