Thursday, May 24, 2012

The Fog (Story) Comments

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The fog moved slowly across the ground
Like a cat on the prowl.
Everything was as quiet as can be
Not even a rustle in the trees.
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Practicing Poetess 23 July 2018

I love story-poems, so I decided I'd read this one. Just as the sensuousness was heating up to an unbearable level, the poem ended abruptly with humour- - JUST IN THE NICK OF TIME! A poem that keeps you in suspense, until the ending dissolves the suspense. Very well-written and imaginative!

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