Wednesday, March 10, 2010

The Fog Comments

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The fog has packed its things
In its cottonwool case.
The fog emptiness brings
To my house lost in space.
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Michael Wooff
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Patti Masterman 11 March 2010

Beautiful work here. I love that the house is lost somewhere, invisible in the fog which has packed its thing in cottonwool. The missing greenhouse is the most lovely, hilarious touch! It's not a humorous poem but it makes me smile. Thanks for this day brightener. I'm glad you are plying your translators pen again. I have gone too long without reading something casually stunning, like this.

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