Friday, January 8, 2016

The Foe. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind makes friendship
To the trees, bushes and all here
When it lashes wild and striking
The trees uproots, bushes perishes
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Gangadharan nair Pulingat..
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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 January 2016

The benevolent nature helps in nurturing life of flora and fauna but when it turns malevolent, it's rampage is devastating for the both. A beautiful and realistic poem penned highlighting this behavior of nature, in the form of wind. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 January 2016

Wonderfully wind makes friendship with trees and bushes. Very fantastically drafted and shared.10

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Rajnish Manga 08 January 2016

Time and tide do not remain the same. Likewise, the force of wind is unpredictable. These are the instruments of change in life. Thanks for this wonderful philosophical poem.

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