^ The Foam Comments
to that which is temporary - life itself
I stare into the vacuum that spreads before me
Into the siphoning of thoughts that go haywire
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Absolutely beautiful. Your mind followed the theme and captured its existential meaning as it disappeared amid the wave-spume. You have a good grounding in poetic diction.
yes....a very beautiful poem....for that which is transitory... loved it. thank you ma'am.
emotions sensitive depressing...temporary i believe...one can find an agonized heart in depth in this poem...10
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7/19/2025 7:42:59 PM # 1.0.0
I have a poem titled IN THE FOAM, which is based on imagination and not as true to lived experience as yours is.