The Fly That Tortured The Spider Comments
Caught beneath an axis of vicious symmetry
the bound fly squirmed
kicking, thrashing and hopelessly bashing
against a coffin of barbed wire silk
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Retaliation will come sooner or later! All wicked acts will bounce back, may not be in the immediate future but in course of time! The way the trap is laid and the manner in which this act of stark revenge is executed is so very impressive! The language used is powerful enough to convey the horror and violence of this blood curdling drama of vengeance! Top marks!
I had posted a comment earlier showing my full appreciation for the poem! Unfortunately it didn't show up and it is missing! So I will have to write another comment!
for tat! Retaliation can come quite unexpected! We have to pay a heavy price for all our acts of wickedness, may not be in the immediate future, but in time. This is a wonderful yarn of revenge. The way the trap is laid with the act of stark revenge executed is so impressive! The language used is powerful to convey the horror of the ''drama'. This is an eye opener to all autocrats and terrorists. Their actions will be paid back in lethal dose one day or other! Amazing write!
nice long story but remember this animals taught humans in their is no mercy the harder the hit the sweeter the love and most gals say have plenty of nectar but your sweeter softer ones makes you so popular How I wish I could also be like a bee like thee lovely poetry KV
A terrifying but very well composed story. True to life. The abused and killed will one day fight back. But often many have to die before that happens. I generally don't care for longer poems but I was fascinated by this one, so vividly and extraordinarily well written.
" Because It's your nature and I will defy it. Beautifully dramatized piece on the revenge of a fly. A gripping piece by and by.
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7/27/2025 11:39:27 PM # 1.0.0
Excellent write with superb imagery. As if I am watching a Walt Disney animated movie. I concur with the wonderful comments of Poet Anniruddha. A gripping wonderful poem from the first stanza to the last. Liked the meaningful message imparted in.this write 10++++and onto my Poem List.