The Fly Comments

nice man beautiful write up

great poem about the fly, love the style.

I envy your content and style. I have wracked my brain to get there, but not yet.

You do write exceptionally well. This is another poem that has al the mechanics of what real poetry is all about: unity, meter, rhyme, content, and style. The subject is subtly referred to in these lines and it was a clever idea to address 'the fly' as someone, and then work on it through the verses. Really clever, artisitic, and immensely enjoyable to read. I have a passion for reading real poems, and the rewards of that passion come when I encounter poems such as this.10++++

Interesting take on this common insect! Fascinating!

hmm i especially like your poem a lot :)