The Fluvial Mind Comments
If the path before you is clear,
It may be your eyes but definitely another's mind;
If you know what you are looking for,
Then that is all you will ever find.
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............very nicely written....I was kind of disappointed to see this poem end.....congratulations on member poem of the day...
After a long time seen new born poem fluvial mind lovely very nice enjoyed mind with soul
Beautiful poem. Yes it takes a long time before most of us realize how our paths have been chalked out way before we knew any thing. enjoyed reading.
short and beautiful...indeed, one has no choice but just follow along and make the best of it...we might think we know what we want, but that is just an illusion....yes, I like this poem very much, especially the title...28788
wonderful read. Life's realities are explained with a flowing river that merges in the ocean or goes unseen in the desert. enjoyed.
Striking and soothing. It flings the mind across a space of a renewed soul. Larger meanings, concrete feelings. Great job!
the poem, i think tells us about the various choices or path we take in our life, we can either disappear without leaving a mark in this now, without leaving stones unturned, or we can make something worth of our life and the world just like the drops of river eventually form the whole ocean.
mind, river, flow. good expression. great feeling and great poem.
If the path before you is clear, It may be your eyes but definitely another's mind NEWTON said: if i have seen further, it is by standing on the shoulders of giants.... the poem offered a beautiful reading...
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7/25/2025 12:25:28 PM # 1.0.0
Not spectacular by any means. Poor rhyme scheme, mediocre vocabulary, lack of convincing emotion, and purposeless meaning that has no power to move readers' thoughts in any certain direction. Like a river had no choice but to flow is a nice line that cleanly shocks the reader as they ponder that thought taken for granted in their mind. This poem does have a nice vague, almost morgue impression left upon my mind. It could be vastly improved, but yet already has a good start on being something worthwhile, which could be said of almost all poetry.