From the cliff,
Where I live,
Flows a waterfall,
Makes its way,
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Awesome..As soon as i kicked off with this composition the waterfall and divine nature started rolling in front of my eyes...It seems you read nature very closely..You worth more than what i expected buddy...Keep up the good work...
So beautiful, serene with nature's music all around showing off it's captivating beauty! ! Excellent write!
I feel the spirit of the water and the sweetness of nature. Beautifully evokative word painting thanks for sharing.....................: O)
Sir Thomas, For me it is not literal atleast for me. But I agree that for every reader the interpretation can be different.
good work the flow is good the words are well pinned and meaning are well told so bravo