Monday, August 20, 2018

The Flung Pennies Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you ask me what time it is,
which is rare, I answer, "It is the
time of Love's Middle Age, when
desire gives way to mutual comfort,
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Daniel Brick
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Paul Brookes 21 August 2018

Great piece what poetry should be

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Daniel Brick 21 August 2018

Wow, Paul, that is a wonderful thing to say about short lyric poem. I wanted to write just a snippet of a conversation, as if you overheard only a few lines.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 August 2018

Daniel, such a wonderful poem....10+++

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Daniel Brick 21 August 2018

Thank you, Bernard. I purposely kept this poem short. Hopefully, the two people say enough in just 21 lines to give you a picture of their friendship.

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St. Paul MN
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