Friday, August 3, 2012

The Fluke Comments

Rating: 3.5

You little creature
You dine in a well nourished
Place of my body
I knew you were boneless
...
Read full text

Duku Akwasi Odwaa Boffour
COMMENTS
Benjamin Paa Willie 21 August 2012

I feel honoured, co-poet, to comment on your poem. Well written! But don't let the pains of the past get to you.

0 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2012

A nice piece of work with memory; but, life is not always smooth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success