Thursday, February 20, 2020

The Fluffy Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh, beautiful and fluffy clouds
Can you make white cotton candies
And lots of marshmallows?
Make them float in the air
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
COMMENTS
Nabakishore Dash 30 May 2023

I wonder how yr brain gives u the ideas.I shall ask for such a great gift from the ALMIGHTY.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 November 2020

Wonderful ask to clouds! I trace great poetic beauty in these two fascinating stanzas. Beautifully composed.5 stars!

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 March 2020

Oh, wonderful and fluffy clouds Do not turn into grey And ominous dark clouds We want to enjoy A long and great summer camp. talking to the clouds about your secret longings. wonderful poem. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 March 2020

Great imagery from the depth of your beautiful mind, the eyes are only helping tools. I love this poem very much with the summer camp and the marshmallows candies. Especially the candies. Thank you for sharing this greatest treat for summertime, dear great poetess! I love the way you worded this poem, so captivatingly presented. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Valsa George 04 March 2020

Clouds look so much like cotton candies! Whenever I see fluffy clouds floating above our heads and trailing along the blue sky, I think of cotton candies! Summer camps are so much fun for children with some candies to chew. A casual observation, but you have made a poem, cute and simple!

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 February 2020

This poem excels in its simplistic beauty, childlike predilection.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 February 2020

The fluffy clouds make beautiful formations cross the sky. A beautiful poem to share. Loved the simplicity and charm of the poem.10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 February 2020

Romance of nature! ! Fragrance of life, Aroma of creation! Musing along, The fluffy clouds. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 February 2020

This is simply awesome and fantastic, dear ate Rose. I just love it....10+++💕💗❤️🙏👌😍

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Susan Williams 22 February 2020

So expressive of a family camp-out in the great outdoors and how we enjoy all the sights and sounds and let our imagination soar- -until we see dark clouds building up on the horizon and we fear our day of play is doomed to be over. Thank you for this special treat and reminding us that once upon a time we named the clouds! 10++

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Kesav Easwaran 21 February 2020

Sweet poem Rose Marie.10+

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Anjandev Roy 21 February 2020

A feast for our summer camp......beautiful. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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