Monday, November 11, 2013

The Flowing Temporal Comments

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Mystic mystery mouths,
Through the pores of installed unconscious,
From Nature-fed temporal vase.
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Subrata Ray
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Paul Brookes 11 November 2013

Great poem but the first line is superfluous. However that just my opinion The poem is very deep and seems to have layers of meaning. More than one reading is necessary to get its impact. Well done BB

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Subrata Ray

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