Monday, July 15, 2019

The Flowing Stream And A Poet's Mind Comments

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The flowing stream sings on a steady tune
As it gently meanders through the meadow
Destined to meet the distant river soon,
After which it will remain just a shadow.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Terry Craddock 19 November 2020

I wrote the poem 'Nature's Vibrant Beautiful Living Souls', inspired by the poem 'The Flowing Stream And A Poet's Mind', by the poet Khairul Ahsan and dedicated to the poet Khairul Ahsan.

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Terry Craddock 19 November 2020

A Song Of Stream River Mountains the stream sings the river rapid flows in mountain flood descent in a rapid weather race dancing down gravity slopes in eternal race to greet the sea the poet's pensive riveted mind flows in the runaway grey river in pensive restless ice melt river the poet flows in runaway river water rests in river rocks flies in mountain air specks with the spirit of the mountains Dedicated to the poet Khairul Ahsan.

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Terry Craddock 19 November 2020

Spun Cradle Of Life nature has a soul each living each physical part has a place in spun cradle of life Inspired by the poem 'The Flowing Stream And A Poet's Mind' by the poet Khairul Ahsan. Dedicated to the poet Khairul Ahsan.

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Terry Craddock 19 November 2020

A Precious Soul nature has a precious soul each living or physical part a place in the cradle of life Inspired by the poem 'The Flowing Stream And A Poet's Mind' by the poet Khairul Ahsan. Dedicated to the poet Khairul Ahsan.

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Terry Craddock 06 November 2020

nature has a soul, each living or physical part, a place in the cradle of life the stream sings, the river rapid flows, in mountain flood descent, in a rapid weather race, dancing down gravity slopes, in eternal race to greet the sea

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Khairul Ahsan 13 September 2020

@Edward Kofi Louis, Thanks for reading the poem and for the nice comment you left here.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 September 2020

@Valsa George, 'Beautiful poem free flowing as a river! I can so well relate to this lovely experience! ' - Thank you very much for sharing your thoughts, having read the poem. Much inspired by the comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 May 2020

Tones of the stream! ! Sounds of the river; Musing along with nature! A poet's mind so sweet writing along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 16 April 2020

A poet's pensive mind flows along with her Up to as far a distance as time permits, Beautiful poem free flowing as a river! I can so well relate to this lovely experience!

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 July 2019

the stream flowing stream naturally awakes, flows the stream of poetic mind and the poetic mind versifies the flowing of eternity....///

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Khairul Ahsan 16 July 2019

'and the poetic mind versifies the flowing of eternity' - thank you, Mahtab Bangalee, for sharing such a wonderful vision here.

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