The Flowers Lay Upon The Lawn Comments

A piece filled with beauty and sadness at the same time. Thanks for sharing, Andrew.

Your share so many lessons in your writing Andrew and this one is to be no exception Amazing work again by you, , , so much feeling put into your work Take care..all the best Love duncan X

this is a very well composed poem indeed., I loved the way you bring out emotions.... very touching piece.. you kept the poignant aspect through out, ... very good.. nice..10 cheers shan

There is a more than touch of angst (and irony?) in this sombre poem about death and the 'hollow' grief that is so often part of the funeral ceremony. So sad that those who turn up to 'pay their last respects' do so out of duty rather than compassion. Your flowers upon the lawn are a fitting symbol of a life well lived. Beautifully written as usual, Andrew. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Andrew, much to like in this well written piece. Loved the line: 'As weeds within the borders grew'. Nice one.10/10 Regards, Ian

Andrew, you have so much empathy for this lady and it is admirable you care for others like you do. The poem flows divinely and your rhyme and rhythm as usual is faultless. Fancy the flowers spelling out her name, and it creates a beautiful picture in my mind. 10 love Karin

Indeed there is no reciprocation of love as long as one is alive in this world. Only after death realisation dawns to many! True message nicely written!