The Flowerpot Man Comments
He lived next door, so quietly,
with sour face and manners,
always pottering about
at dark, unearthly hours.
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I DID laugh (out loud) at the last line, and I did NOT mind that you did not end with a rhyme. BUT I did like the rhymes which I did find. five stars. : ) bri ok, maybe 'codes'/'clothes' is a rhyme.
I was told by other eminent poets that rhyming is out and who am I to argue with them
***** five stars for naked men and women who admire them. But 'WATCH OUT' for the worm between his legs (in front not back) . ;) bri
(cont.) 'putter around verb To engage in meaningless activity. Move around aimlessly.' AND I FOUND THIS: (cont.)
(cont.) I'm not sure if I've ever heard of 'pottering around'. I think I've heard (here in U.S.) of 'puttering around'. (cont.)
'potter around verb To potter, to be gently active doing various things in an almost aimless manner. Move around aimlessly.' (cont.)
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7/27/2025 6:35:54 PM # 1.0.0
When he frolicked naked on his lawn, more than just his flowers were bobbing!