Sunday, June 9, 2013

The Flower Of Wounds Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is not the star
Of the sky

Nor a fresh flower
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Abdul Wahab
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 June 2013

A lotus from the mud...wounds are such it pave the path to walk in a direction to ease a control mechanism nice poem deserve

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 June 2013

Great hues metaphor poem i enjoyd readin tday! Pls do read my poem too.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 09 June 2013

It is a very interesting interpretation of colors. I am sending you in a message what they mean for me.

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Heather Wilkins 09 June 2013

Some of your colors are delicate while others are bold. A lovely contrast of emotions. nice writing Abdul.

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Captain Cur 09 June 2013

I liked the way you colors throughout your poem to speak of your emotions. Good ending.

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