The rain comes down proud
In a heavy downpour.
The flower buds,
So shy to come out
Of their green blanket,
Bow down,
Little by little,
Until they reach the ground.
Out of the dark clouds,
The sun comes out.
Its rays throw
A warm glow,
Over the flower buds.
They rise little by little,
Come out of their green blanket,
With their hues so bright.
Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
***** THERE'S a 'flowerbed/ of Flower Buds for YOU, Rose Marie! ! Five Starflowers. Very nice; I did NOT know you were so attuned to the lives of flowers, BUT, with the name Rose (Marie) you have an 'edge' on many of us. bri : )
How fascinating are the buds that bow down with rain, then rise up with the warm glow of the sunlight.
Such an exquisite poem. I can visualize the movement of the flower buds. Marvellous imagery.
Such a lovely piece! It displays the wonder of rain and flowers' sweet harmony! I love how hard and devastating the rain is, how tender the flowers are, and how warm the sunlight is in this poem! Majestic! Thank you for sharing it!
So simple and yet, so great! A glowing picture of Nature, written with exquisite good taste
The cherubs of natures heavenly orchestra, flowers spout from the dismal sights. As ever a Beautiful work, bless your gift and your mindful eye for words.
Beautiful. The sunshine after the storm and how it affects us and all living things... Lovely poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I see a ray of hope in your poem.5* Lovable.