Friday, March 13, 2015

The Flower Comments

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The Rose Glison’s from the morning dew
The sun smiles and the rose awakens
The warmth of day caress her pedals and they gently open
The pollen from within reminds the flower of the beauty of her life
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Terry Searcy
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Howard Savage 16 September 2016

Great poem with profound metaphors and fortified emotions. Reality of reality.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 January 2016

The pollen from within reminds the flower of the beauty of her life And she begins to anticipate the bee and the flower smiles the bee arrives and the flower gives herself to him and she is alone....... . love, loneliness, care, giving oneself to another. all that is expressed in this short poem. you are very imaginative my dear poet. thank you very much. tony

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