Friday, December 30, 2011

***the Floral Petal Dress*** Comments

Rating: 3.1

The cold morning wind clinically
Undresses the flower’s petal dress,
Still standing tall the birth of seeds begins
Their random atmospheric journey,
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Ken e Hall
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Chris Zachariou 10 August 2014

Wonderfully written. The regeneration of nature is always a miracle in my eyes and you have captured this in all its beauty.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2013

Wow. Beautiful poem..Loved reading it..

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Sally Plumb Plumb 03 September 2012

An educational journey.

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Hans Vr 14 January 2012

Excellent poem. The images of the midwife and all others are very well chosen to describe this wonderful part of nature.

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Ramesh Rai 31 December 2011

REALLY AMAZING POEM, WISH YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR. WITH KIND REGARDS

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Vipins Puthooran 31 December 2011

Wow, it's an amazing poem! ! ! Top marks! ! !

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Ken e Hall

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