The Flood Comments
Leaving behind disastrous taste,
It came, an unexpected guest.
Came, a lot on the way to drown,
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To press on! ! The river losing her very address. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Leaving behind disastrous taste, It came, an unexpected guest.......fantastic beginning. So touching, captivating and impressive. Concluding lines are most memorable. Beautiful work.
So thirsty, it drank drown the town. Receding, whilst claiming some life, It left alive a flood of strife.... //.... The devastation caused by unprecedented floods captured with all its ferocity in a small poem like this. Thanks, Aniruddha ji.
You've picked up the right lines for emphasis. And thanks for the feedback and rating.
We just hope and pray for those who were heavily affected by the flood. May they all recover from the disaster... Well penned, sir Aniruddha....10++++
Thank you Rev Bernard, so nice for your prayers and good wishes. Things are back to normal now.
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8/3/2025 2:01:21 PM # 1.0.0
A very vivid portrayal of the wrath of Mother Nature through excessive rain. Great imagery and a great rhyme throughout this wonderful poem. Another brilliant write, sir. I concur with Bro. Bernard 's heartwarming comments.
Thank you, Rose Marie, for the good words