Tuesday, September 9, 2014

The Flood Comments

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Hurry, Tilly, the water's rising;
We must lead all the horses from the barn.
Hurry, Tilly, the water's rising;
Find the cow and calf so they don't come to harm.
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 February 2015

Superb rhyme scheme...along with Virtually flawless stanzaicstructure throughout..Bravo, young lady ~FjR~

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Sandra Conner

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Illinois, U. S. A.
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