The Floating Leaf Comments
Your destiny is in your hand, they say
Be strong and make your own way
You will reach wherever you want
If you stop saying that you can't
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This way and that, led by fate, we move Like a leaf fallen from a branch that shook Carried by the wind across the garden Into the flowing water of the nearby brook.. great and wonderful expressions my dear poetess. thank u. tony
Thank you, Dr. Tony, for taking the time to visit my poem and for the kind words! May God bless you!
A lovely poem! I always like the use simile! You have employed it mixed with imagery...we move Like a leaf fallen from a branch....Appreciate the piece of work! (10)
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Your destiny is in your hand, they say Be strong and make your own way....inspirational! A great poem....full marks.