Friday, October 28, 2016

The Fleeing Swan Comments

Rating: 5.0

With wings tired from flying she arrives
Her eyes sore from the war she had been seeing
Kissed the day goodbye thinking of all the sad goodbyes
Unfortunately she had no choice but fleeing
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Juliette Capulet
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Chinedu Dike 15 December 2016

An insightful narrative piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Juliette. Please read my poem CHILDREN OF CRUEL FATE.

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