Wednesday, September 16, 2009

The Flame Comments

Rating: 4.0

The flame on the candle flickers
Creating shadows on the wall
The wax melts
It forms a pool as it hits the water
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Tina MacAdam
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Jean Dament 16 September 2009

Another well written poem that has depth & shows much emotions felt. Good Job. Ravensong

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