The Five Jewels Comments

The poem full of meaning is endearing.Very well written with excellent rhyme! Thanks.

NIce inspiring poem. Very well written.

And uplifting and eleghantly rendered poem about this whole world's most pressing problem. A bravo to you

a nice explanation of peace. flow of this poem is also nice.the foundation of peace, lovely

I love the way you have started the poetry...The Five precious jewels on Silvern moon Greeted me to give great boon

Lovely written dearest Rekha! To stop the path of violence is the people dream. My efforts, too small I don't think that counts. But if we do unite no power can stop all the warmth of hearts.Thank you! ! Love and smiles, Elena