The Five Elements (Senryu Series) Comments

Good, but I thought love was the fifth element.

one of your best poems yet. you have mastered brevity with the right choice of words.

Excellent. These can become addictive, but you are a thoughtful and imaginative writer and I look forward to more.

Tightly written and deep in place. I loved this collection! what are you going to write on next?

Nicely done, Govind... love that last line.

A Senryu series, that's terrific; well done Govind