Monday, March 13, 2006

The Fisherman's Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

he'd hooked his last
perch, pickerel and bass
pike and the like
never more, that sudden strike
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Chuck Audette
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Robert E Hann 18 October 2009

All my life I've loved to fish, but suddenly I have one wish. That when my life becomes post dated...... I think I'd like to be cremated!

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R H 14 April 2006

An original piece that incorporates your wry sense of humour complete with an effective twist. Again very visual - liked the flow and ryhthm of this line 'the tug of the pole, the whirl of the reel' which caught (no pun intended!) the action so well. Warm wishes, Justine.

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you have a smart and original sense of humour. this was fun to read. Jake

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Anna Russell 14 March 2006

Smart and sick - you at your best. And I agree with Esther. Hugs Anna xxx

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Poetry Hound 14 March 2006

Very clever, you sly dog. I had never thought about it in those terms before - the revenge of the worms!

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Esther Leclerc 13 March 2006

I don't know... Methinks there will be a large tome of the 'Chuck-est' poems around out for Christmas. Should be! No one compares to you, friend! Thanks for a big bedtime guffaw! ! ! : ] Est

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Charles M Moore 13 March 2006

Nice write, disgusting thought, shows depth(about 6 foot) .

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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