Friday, January 23, 2009

The Fisherman Comments

Rating: 5.0

How could they not?
It is just an inescapable given
that they would find you irresistible.
One after the other, or several at a time
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amber roser
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Juniper March 05 October 2009

I loved the surprise ending, it shed a whole new light, making me read and reread. Nice, wonderful specifics and yet vague enough to leave so much to the imagination

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Last hakkaobake 02 October 2009

wow... what to say? the relationship between your dad and you can be shown here but I like how it spins to and fro not telling who your talking about till the end. you work in a way I've never seen before. the eazy way to put it is great. *_* 10

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Greenwolfe 1962 28 January 2009

This is a classic. I normally don't read things this long but I made an exception for you because of what I saw in the first one I read. I was right. You are a true prose writer. I'm glad to meet you. I am Greenwolfe 1962. GW62

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Shannon Price 27 January 2009

I think this one is my all time favourite miss roser. It's brilliant :)

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Dan Taylor 26 January 2009

Your definitely gifted! Keep it up.

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John Mccudden 23 January 2009

well writen peice of work i like the twist at the end well done keep up the good work

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