Wednesday, September 24, 2008

The Fish In Yonder Pond Comments

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There was a fish in yonder pond
His fins of which he was not fond
For walking was his goal, you see-
to walk around like you or me
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Mela Marie
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Poem with a flow of amusing - sometimes surprising and nice pictures (responds to my poem Nature Advice) . Aesop tales may become didactic poems. So thanks for sharing dear poet, Mela Marie. Build more on this. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Lily Law 25 September 2008

a poem that pictured what dream is and its consequence... nice! ! !

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