The First Walk - 08 Comments
The first walk is intoxicating
as you breathe, fume, flow, and surge
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The bed turns into a road. A carefully crafted haiku, so well written. Thanks.
The first walk is intoxicating as you breathe, fume, flow, and surge The bed turns into a road. A great haiku shared. 10++++++++++++++++++++
The first walk is intoxicating as you breathe, fume, flow, and surge The bed turns into a road. A great haiku shared.
The first walk is intoxicating as you breathe, fume, flow, and surge The bed turns into a road. A carefully crafted haiku, so well written. Thanks. 10+++++++++
The first walk is intoxicating as you breathe, fume, flow, and surge The bed turns into a road. A carefully crafted haiku, so well written. Thanks.
Addiction! ! Intoxication! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I like your handling of Haiku- - you make your reader dig but then we are adults and we should no longer want our poetry spoon fed to us like pap..10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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The bed turns into a road. A carefully crafted haiku, so well written. Thanks. 10++++++++++++