The First Walk - 08 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The First Walk - 08

Rating: 5.0


The first walk is intoxicating

as you breathe, fume, flow, and surge

The bed turns into a road.

Friday, March 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,sex
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 23 March 2018

I like your handling of Haiku- - you make your reader dig but then we are adults and we should no longer want our poetry spoon fed to us like pap..10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 April 2018

Addiction! ! Intoxication! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 01 April 2018

The first walk is intoxicating as you breathe, fume, flow, and surge The bed turns into a road. A carefully crafted haiku, so well written. Thanks.

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Rajendra Rout 08 May 2018

I agree with Seema madam

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Sanjukta Sahoo 06 April 2018

The bed turns into a road. A carefully crafted haiku, so well written. Thanks. 10++++++++++++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 06 April 2018

The bed turns into a road. A carefully crafted haiku, so well written. Thanks.

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Alina Kaikeyi 01 April 2018

The first walk is intoxicating as you breathe, fume, flow, and surge The bed turns into a road. A great haiku shared. 10++++++++++++++++++++

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Alina Kaikeyi 01 April 2018

The first walk is intoxicating as you breathe, fume, flow, and surge The bed turns into a road. A great haiku shared.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 01 April 2018

The first walk is intoxicating as you breathe, fume, flow, and surge The bed turns into a road. A carefully crafted haiku, so well written. Thanks. 10+++++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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