Monday, March 28, 2005

The First Time Comments

Rating: 3.7

Sitting around a musty hotel,
Drinking a musky muscatel,
I saw her uncovered shimmering shine,
And I smiled a longing wanting smile,
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Sandra Osborne
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Christine Magee 29 March 2005

A 10 ++ from me, Sandra. A beautiful, open and honest declaration of love. Chrissie

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Herbert Nehrlich1 28 March 2005

Great stuff, Sandra. Wish I could have been there (would have sent the other one home) . H

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Michael Shepherd 28 March 2005

That is stunning, Sandra, almost the classic statement. Beautiful.

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kenneth william snow 28 March 2005

Wow Sandra, this is full of passion and power. Very well done. Kenneth

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